Looks like great plant growth, but I'm not a fan of the scape. The focus point is obviously the stumpy looking piece of driftwood, but you don't want to put your focus point dead center. It makes it look artificial.
It is a bit overstocked, but the only fish I take issue with is the bala shark. Those grow pretty large, much too big for a 58. Most of those fish are pretty small and shouldn't be too much of a bioload.