I think the two groups you're trying to get at with this scape will work but not if you do it that symmetrically -- off center man, off center!
Keep trying until you get something amazing, the best you can; even if it takes two weeks. Besides, we typically don't get to see a dry tank for more than a few days --- enjoy it while it lasts!
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