The photo is beautiful (you have beautiful cats) but I feel something is off.
I feel as though there is a light that is missing. The black are competing with the whites, making both disappear,
And despite the great contrast on the nose and under the eye, the rest doesnt seem to have enough. I feel as though it all disappears in a sea of grey.
The main focal point is the eyes and I can see why.
I feel that theres and inner glow that is missing. I have no idea how to capture that or even what to look for. But theres and intensity and life to good photos of eyes. And I feel its almost there.. but not quite.
The composition seems a little off for me.
I think next time a more interesting angle is something too look for. Go in closer. If you really want to focus on the eyes go for the eyes. Right now they feel like an afterthought almost.
I'm not exactly sure how to word what I feel when I look at it.
It lacks oomph...
Ok... heres some of my shots..
The kitten is Kenai...