Ok here are my comments on your aquascape.
First of all the wood is moved to the back and that was a good move. Unfortunately the only other thing I can say good is the C. parva. Right now the leaves look kind of large but when the new leaves start to grow in they will be much smaller and will be nice for a forground. But they do take a while to grow and get runners to fill in the foreground. But in time they will be really nice.
As for the rest of the plants my personal opinion all are too large for your setup. Anyone of those plants will overrun and fill the complete tank. Small tanks need small plants.
The java ferns can very easily fill the whole tank. I would remove them, and if possible trade them for some moss. Use some small leaf plants and that will give the setup a feeling of a larger one. Also the other crypts will become quite large for such a small tank
Some suggestions will be Rotalas, like Rotala macrandra sp green. Rotala sp green, rotala rotundifolia, Rotala colorata.