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post #271 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-09-2012, 01:13 AM
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I like all three, the reflections in the river are nice, number 2 held the least interest but I'm sure it was awesome in person, and the wagon held it's own.

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post #272 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-09-2012, 01:40 AM
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Morbid! The gravestones are somewhat overexposed, I would tone down the highlights and slightly up the contrast, i.e.:

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post #273 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-09-2012, 07:21 AM
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If your going to critique, you gotta post a photo!!

BTW that's Arlington Cemetery in VA., those are all the graves of soldiers that died for our country.
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post #274 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-09-2012, 07:30 PM
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Yeah I figured it was a military cemetary. I edited yours but okay:

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post #275 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-10-2012, 01:22 PM
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I think a bit too much dead space to the right past the cocktails, maybe a tad more foreground (then the person opposite won't be missing just a head), little les DoF and mwah!



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post #276 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-12-2012, 11:53 PM
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Maybe a little too exposed, but I love that picture the way it is. Perfect timing!

Here's mum and the kids. There's something wrong with the photo, but I can't find out what it is exactly...

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post #277 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-23-2012, 05:37 AM
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Very cool shot. I think what may have really made it though is zooming a little more on the fish. The rock is almost a distraction in a way. Get closer on the fish and put the eye at one of the "rule of thirds" intersections. The eye should be one of the main points of interest (or the main point of interest) and it is almost in the center. The main subject should not USUALLY be dead center. It does still have alot of interesting bits going for it though!

Something missing in this one for me.

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post #278 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-23-2012, 09:35 AM
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Great contrast between the between the sky and the grass, with the feature tree. Maybe if the picture was taken a a slightly different angle it... there is just some thing about this picture thats off.


Here's a pic of a butterfly i took when i was in the Amazon A few weeks ago.

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post #279 of 693 (permalink) Old 07-28-2012, 08:53 PM
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Beautiful little critter. Next time you go to the Amazon, call me up! (okay, I'm joking, but I REALLY want to go there).

Here's a bug shot of my own.

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post #280 of 693 (permalink) Old 08-08-2012, 04:58 AM
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Well its a little out of focus but I like the idea I took this tonight and just had to share it the color was so amazing.

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post #281 of 693 (permalink) Old 08-09-2012, 06:58 PM
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I do some fotography also. Here are some of my favs




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Lovely pics but the effect on the bottom one makes it very overexposed, perhaps tone down the effect a little.

A couple I took yesterday,



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Remember folks...title of the thread is "Critique the photo above you." Offer some critique to help others with their photography, even tips and tricks if you know any, or just a couple nice words. Anyone that takes pictures knows it feels nice to hear a little positive about their work and appreciate when someone points out (tactfully) flaws and helps to help correct them.

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Lovely pets!... You live in a zoo?

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Lovely pets!... You live in a zoo?
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