Hmmm, looks like it could use a bit wider of a perspective, but closer....like super wide angle...say 14mm on full frame...
Here's one from a photoshoot I did today. I'm backlogged on posting anything, but I was skimming through the shots after I got home and I really like this one, because this is exactly the vision I had in mind when I was setting it up
It looks like a good capture of both nature and human expression. I don't think I can offer anything in terms of possible improvements. Just curious what the shot would look like had you use a slightly wider angle lens or had you lowered the tripod (sort of speak) by a foot or two while angling the lens up a few degrees to compensate. edit: One more thing, try cropping out all the dark clouds basically somewhere above the line that sits in between the horizon and your logo. Sorry, took liberty to do so with ms paint (don't have ps on my work laptop).
Here's a street shot in NYC after the rain:
Last edited by etane; 06-19-2012 at 05:08 PM.