First of all, nice tank. Your plants look healthy. It's a beautiful tank the way it is right now. I agree it's a little bit of a jungle though.
Please take this constructive criticism in stride (since you asked for it!):
One of the issues I see is that the tank looks like it's been cut right down the middle. Why not repeat some of the plants that you use on the right side on the left side? Also, what kind of lawn are you going for? You have a val lawn on the left and what looks like E. tennellus red on the right. While both plant masses look really healthy, you could probably thin them out a bit and fill in the center gap.
There are some stems directly behind the Hygro in the middle of the tank that you can pull out, cut in half and replant further to the left, near that one super-long stem. They're lost behind the hygro anyway, and that one long stem looks awkward by itself.
If you want things to look a little bit less like a jungle, I'd maybe replant the stems on the right side and group them by species. They look a little tangled the way they are now.
PS - What was in the $8.99 bag anyway?