Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Los Angeles, CA
I love it and am no aquascaper but here is my rough interpretation.
The two islands have similar shapes but the one on the right has the rocks spaced rather than overlapped and the prominent "pointy" rock acts as a focal point which takes away from the stunning left.
Maybe move the rocks on right closer together and angle the "pointy" rock differently so it isn't the main focal point?